Pitch Reflection

1) Are there any areas of your presentation you would like to give more information on.
In my presentation i clearly went over the ideas and things i might add in my music video. In my presentation i think i could of worded some thing differently to help portray my ideas/thoughts more clearly. I think with my music video presentation i could of been more creative with my information and the presentation on whole. I should of added Goodwin's theory in my presentation more because i think i lacked that element which is the key part of the whole music video unit. Technicality i think i could of used animation better because i had certain images popping up when they weren't on cue.

2) Strengths and Weaknesses
My audience let me know weather the presentation was weak or strong, luckily for me my response was positive. The audience nip picked on certain areas of my presentation  on way i could improve it, in my music video feedback i get given some helpful advice form Sir at 01:36 on my idea to think about change it to a video about the friendzone rather than a bad relationship with the friend-zone twist because it would make my video different. My presentation was strong because it highlighted what i wanted my audience to know about my music video but there were some points that needed polishing up so that they were clearer to my audience such as my locations my location were a weak point because i didn't do enough research on though area compared to some of the other sections in my presentation.

3) Improvements
From my feedback could tell there were some points that may of not been clear on i think in future presentations i should be more clearer with my words and work on presentation skills my eye contact was very limited with my audience and i think i looked at the board to often when trying to get my point across to the audience. My tone of voice could of been a bit better i think it dragged along which could sound a bit boring to some members in the audience and making them loose interest in my concept. I used alot of hand movement so that to help me express myself but the aspects i said i should improve on could make my presentation better.

4) Changes to Music Video Concept
I think based on the feedback given i wouldn't change my music video concept but i would change the type of perspective i was trying to promote initial power point. I needed to make the video into a music video about the friend zone rather than be a cheap version of Mario Let Me Love You, i think i should do the friend-zone because it is not as mainstream as the other types of narratives you would find in the love genre. I think if i change it to this idea it would allow me to be more creative and incorporate much more things that would happen to  some who is playing the back seat role with a friend in a relationship. Also if i do make these changes i beloeve it will attract more people in my target audience compared to my original idea.